Saturday, October 24, 2009

Post 9: attempting to write a haiku

Laughing children play
In cascading hues those leaves
Glisten as they glide

2 comments:

  1. Wow, Melanie! What a beautiful poem. I like the connection between the playing children and the multi-colored leaves. Nancy

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  2. This haiku brought back so many wonderful memories as a child. Where did all the time go.

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